Two of these were my prompts (Cara's first time/loss of virginity and whips), and I really like what you did with them here. Your Denna is great, as usual -- all mistressy and hard -- but I love that moment when she realizes this is Cara's first time, and we get to see through the cracks in her armor just a tiny bit, and know that she does care about Cara (as much as a Mord-Sith like her can, anyway).
This line I loved: 'Wherever you go, whatever you do - whoever you are with, a part of you will forever belong with me now.' It was exactly this concept that made me want to see Cara lose her virginity to Denna in the first place! Have you been lurking around inside my brains? o.O
And of course, it was very, very hot. I would love to see more of this universe! Like how things change between them in the temple now that Cara "belongs with her"? Maybe? Please? :D
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Two of these were my prompts (Cara's first time/loss of virginity and whips), and I really like what you did with them here. Your Denna is great, as usual -- all mistressy and hard -- but I love that moment when she realizes this is Cara's first time, and we get to see through the cracks in her armor just a tiny bit, and know that she does care about Cara (as much as a Mord-Sith like her can, anyway).
This line I loved: 'Wherever you go, whatever you do - whoever you are with, a part of you will forever belong with me now.' It was exactly this concept that made me want to see Cara lose her virginity to Denna in the first place! Have you been lurking around inside my brains? o.O
And of course, it was very, very hot. I would love to see more of this universe! Like how things change between them in the temple now that Cara "belongs with her"? Maybe? Please? :D