Ah, yes, the dead thing. I always forget about that, since in my mind it never happened ;)
It wasn't confusing at all! I think it can sometimes be hard to write stories that use more than one characters' POV, but you did a great job with that here. I liked be able to hear Cara's thoughts as well, especially as she woke up and tried to figure out what was happening.
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It wasn't confusing at all! I think it can sometimes be hard to write stories that use more than one characters' POV, but you did a great job with that here. I liked be able to hear Cara's thoughts as well, especially as she woke up and tried to figure out what was happening.
I can't wait for part 2! :D