http://mistsofdreams.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mistsofdreams.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] madame_denna 2013-04-12 06:14 pm (UTC)

Amazing!! I love how you built the story, how the intensity grew increasingly, how that ridiculous sliver of hope your reader may have vanished with each new word. The end is so powerful. Beautiful piece.
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