Date: 2012-01-10 03:21 am (UTC)
Oh my god, that ending was amazing. I was not at all expecting the humor, it was so perfect. I'm still grinning.

Cara's attitude is great, too. I loved these lines:

And she would love to be around for that, but she has her new chambers to inspect.

and

"not yet, but I will allow you another try."

I'm so glad you wrote this! :D
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