You always write Denna so well! Dominant and sensual at the same time, and yet we also get to see that she isn't entirely heartless when she pauses after discovering Cara's virginity. Just perfect!
I also love your Cara, in this story as well as your others. She's forced into submission by Denna, but you never let her be truly weak. Even with this young submissive Cara, you can see the powerful woman she is destined to be.
I know you hate the word "sequel" but you left me wanting more with the line:
Wherever you go, whatever you do - whoever you are with, a part of you will forever belong with me now.'
I can just see this becoming an interesting development in a "Resurrection" based fic. :)
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Date: 2012-02-05 06:13 am (UTC)I also love your Cara, in this story as well as your others. She's forced into submission by Denna, but you never let her be truly weak. Even with this young submissive Cara, you can see the powerful woman she is destined to be.
I know you hate the word "sequel" but you left me wanting more with the line:
Wherever you go, whatever you do - whoever you are with, a part of you will forever belong with me now.'
I can just see this becoming an interesting development in a "Resurrection" based fic. :)