Your Denna/Cara stories are always so hot! It concerns me a bit that you so often hit my secret Mord'Sith kinks with your stories. Get out of my brain, Madame Denna! :-)
One of the things that I really enjoy about this story, and about most of your stories in general, is your perfect pacing. Both you and Denna make anticipation a punishment (or a pleasure, perhaps) all it's own, as we wait to see exactly what she's going to do and how she's going to do it. It's exactly the kind of head game that the Denna in my mind would play and you write it perfectly.
Your AN says you were practically forced to write this. I think Denna wants you to fill another prompt...and you know how cranky she gets when she doesn't get her way. :D
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Date: 2012-04-18 03:55 am (UTC)One of the things that I really enjoy about this story, and about most of your stories in general, is your perfect pacing. Both you and Denna make anticipation a punishment (or a pleasure, perhaps) all it's own, as we wait to see exactly what she's going to do and how she's going to do it. It's exactly the kind of head game that the Denna in my mind would play and you write it perfectly.
Your AN says you were practically forced to write this. I think Denna wants you to fill another prompt...and you know how cranky she gets when she doesn't get her way. :D