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Jul. 21st, 2012 12:00 am
madame_denna: Denna my Mistress (Denna - close/mistress denna)
[personal profile] madame_denna
Pairing: Denna/Kahlan
Word count: ~270
Warnings: none
Written for: [livejournal.com profile] legendland (Challenge 35: Legendland Marathon - Fanfiction)
Drabble: I/X
Prompt: 'Denna/Kahlan, breaking point'
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement intended. They are not mine and - of course no money is made.



"Don't make me wait, Confessor."

It's not far in the evening of yet another day or at least Kahlan assumes that it is. She can't remember the last time she' felt warm sunrays on her skin or heard birds chirp ancient melodies off the trees.

Richard is gone - and with him, he took her fire, all of her fight. She doesn't know what has happened to Cara or Zedd.

Sometimes, in the dead silence of the night she can hear a woman scream in the distance. There are moments when she wonders if it's Cara's voice. In other moments, she just doesn't want to know.

"I can tell that you want to.. End the fear, Kahlan. End the pain."

Denna's breath brushes softly against her ear and Kahlan shivers at the faint contact. A contact that is for once not the tip of blonde Mord'Sith's Agiel.

"End it now," Denna whispers.

Times of fights and resistance are long over. Kahlan knows, as does Denna. The chains rattle slightly as Kahlan arches her back as much as she is still able to get the feeling back to her limps. The moan of agony is not to hold back as the pain spreads from her arms all the way to the tips of her toes.

Denna laughs, then captures Kahlan's lips with her own, hard, brutal, wanting. When they break apart, it comes so naturally to her tongue, that Kahlan wants to hate herself, but can't find the strength, "Mistress."

Kahlan knows that it is exactly this moment, sealing her fate.

A quiet, private moment between a Mistress and her pet.

The moment when the Mother Confessor, and Kahlan, cease to exist.

Date: 2012-07-21 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] endgirl.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, this is so haunting and heartbreaking and awesome. Very very well done!

(AND OMG YOU WROTE DENNA/KAHLAN I AM SO HAPPY ASL;DKA;LKD)

Date: 2012-07-21 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Thanks! I love their imagined relationship, it's so wonderfully twisted.. uhh ehem..

(*yay* I'd like to write more now - but there are NO MORE PROMPTS!)

Date: 2012-07-22 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] endgirl.livejournal.com
But! But! You could use one of those generic prompts, like "thunderstorms." Aaaaand I put in a Cara/Denna prompt for you :D

ETA: WHICH I JUST REALIZED YOU POSTED!!! :DDD
Edited Date: 2012-07-22 05:57 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-07-22 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Haha you're right! *lol* *facepalm* Forget I said anything. Yes! Thanks for that! You're always so good to me :D *clings*

Date: 2012-07-25 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistsofdreams.livejournal.com
It's so good but my heart can hardly handle Kahlan being broken. Make this pain go away (in 5000 words). :p Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2012-07-29 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Mine either!!! *lol* 5000 words? I'd love too! xD but I don't get Kahlan that well but pshhh xD

Thank you! XD

Date: 2012-07-28 11:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cara-cersei.livejournal.com
Brilliant Drabble- so short yet you capture their relationship so well!!

Date: 2012-07-29 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Thanks! xD I tried, but I suck at writing Kahlan xD That's the reason usually don't xD

Date: 2012-07-30 10:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cara-cersei.livejournal.com
Really I dont agree- I think you capture Kahlan very well!

Date: 2012-07-31 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Haha thanks ;)

Date: 2012-08-02 10:21 am (UTC)
ext_399534: (HPbonniepretty)
From: [identity profile] angel-in-tears.livejournal.com
Oh wow. That is perfect and wow!!! I love it!

Date: 2012-08-04 11:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2012-08-03 11:02 am (UTC)
meridian_rose: pen on letter background  with text  saying 'writer' (legend of the seeker: rahl angst)
From: [personal profile] meridian_rose
This is intense :D

Date: 2012-08-04 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
That was the plan xD Thanks!

Date: 2013-04-11 07:20 pm (UTC)
jacquelee: (Kahlan)
From: [personal profile] jacquelee
OMGs YESSSS! I think I love this even more then the other Denna/Kahlan one I commented on. *FEEELINGS* I especially love the last few lines, they give me ALL THE FEELINGS! OMG! They're absolutely perfect. Guuuuh. *FLAILS*

Date: 2013-04-12 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-denna.livejournal.com
Haha, I'm glad you liked it! I don't know but I always see Denna and Kahlan in a rather non-romantic relationship as this.. probably bc it's headcanon ;) They have so much potential.. *sighs* Thank you very much for your comment, I'm really pleased to know that I'm not alone out there shipping them xD

((I'm coming back to your other comment tomorrow, I just feel like I fall asleep any second.. idk but someone left so very nice comments and I felt inspired for a new Denna/Kahlan story that ate away all my time :P)

Date: 2013-04-12 06:08 am (UTC)
jacquelee: (Kahlan black and white)
From: [personal profile] jacquelee
Heeee, yep, love it! :) Oh, yes, nothing romantic about it, I meant feelings in another category entirely. :) You know...
Mistress/Pet is my single biggest kink and those two are perfect for that especially the way you write them. So yes, I'm definitely shipping them in that sense. Hard.

((OMG! Commenting on that other story in a sec, just wanted to say that I didn't even dared asking you to write more and you still did! OMG! YAY! I'm even more glad I commented now. :)))

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